Thursday, June 28, 2012

500 Words

I'm trying to write 500 words each day as part of my effort to be more creative. I'm focusing on fiction/poetry/essays/analysis/etc. The goal is to get in the habit of writing a LOT, since writing will be a key area on the GRE and a tremendous element of grad school. I'm also trying to spend at least 30 minutes a day researching possible areas of emphasis for my thesis and/or research.

I might occasionally post these here, though I think I'll mostly put them on my writing blog. So here's today's effort, just to prove I did it:
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They were sitting at a table near me. Both of his hands, wrinkled and arthritic, clasped her tiny hand in his. He looked into her face with great interest as she prattled on, not making a lick of sense to anyone but him. Her words made him laugh, and I watched his face transform. I saw an indescribable something in his face, perhaps a glimpse of the man that he once was, before age bent and twisted his tall frame.

He looked at me, still fully engaged in his joy.  The tenderness I saw there, and his obvious devotion to his wife touched my heart deeply. Sitting alone at my table, I felt a sudden stab of jealousy. Kind of silly, isn’t it, to be jealous of a couple nearly 40 years older than me? Yet the stark contrast of this man with his nurturing demeanor, still so obviously in love with his wife despite what seemed to my experienced eye to be advancing dementia, with the bleakness of my table, devoid of any interaction, pained me to my core.
I smiled back and watched as his wife let go of his hands and dug into her pancakes.

“She loves her pancakes on Tuesdays,” he said, still grinning.

“But it’s Wednesday,” I said.

“Not to her,” he said with a wink. “I figure, as long as she enjoys coming here with me, and as long as she still eats like that, we’re just gonna keep on coming.” He looked pensive for a moment, but then his smile came back. “People say she’s not there anymore, but coming here – well, it definitely proves that’s still her.”

“It looks like you two are very happy, and I guess that’s all that matters in the end.”

“Lots of days are hard. Really hard. But that’s what I signed up for, isn’t it? Always and forever, I’ll be her husband and her protector.” He drank some of his ice water in big, noisy gulps. “She looked after me every day of her life, until this disease started messing with her. My turn!”

Once again, I had that pain in my chest as I momentarily contemplated my pending senior years. I pushed the thought of forty or more years of loneliness out of my mind as I questioned, “Did your wife work when she was younger?”

The smile was back in full force. “Yeah! You know, she was a legal secretary for years before our children were born. After they were born, she couldn’t bear to go back to work, and so we made do. She decided to do free lance writing for the local newspaper, so she could stay at home, you know? Did quite well. Only retired from that about three years before the Alzheimer’s took hold.”

“Wow! And what about you…what did you do?”

He suddenly became wistful. “I was a teacher at the medical school where we lived.” He looked down at his hands. “Used to really enjoy teaching. I miss it sometimes. But this is more important…and besides, I was getting so old that the young docs were taking bets on how much longer it would be before I dropped dead in class.” He winked and smiled again. “Thought about pretending to drop dead on the last day of teaching, just to mess with them. I chickened out.”

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